Bleeding Rose

Great job! For this being your first love song it is very precious. Hold on to it for a long time. It might one day be the one and only ...

Thank you all for your reviews and critiques. I realize that it is need of serious editing and realized that before I posted it. I rushed this writing in the ...

Yah...I have no idea what this means...or even says...I can't even pronounce it!

Thanks guys! He was able to record this song on a CD because of North West Idol. He recorded it and gave it to his newly wedded wife on his ...

Great job Arashi! This was a very nice piece and I liked it very much. I loved the subject that it was pushing towards. Once again, great job. Keep writing!

Oh my gosh! I forgot about the "knew"! Lol! thank you for your review! Much appreciated!

Come on people! Review! Rip it apart!

Wow. I liked this very much because it was deep and set out a strong message. Very good. I found no punctuation errors or grammar errors because you had me ...

I absolutely love this! I think that it is great! Keep writing! Ididn't find anything wrong with it.

I liked this. It was very good and detailed. It was also very interesting! I thought that it was cool the way that you set the theme and how you ...

I thought that this was adorable! I loved the way you just took a normal situation and made it so serious and real. I also liked the way that you ...

This was pretty good! I liked how it was always the last word of the last line of every stanza that had no other word rhyming it. I thought that ...

Oh my goodness! I have to show this to my science teacher Mr.Tuggle! May I use this? This was hilarious and we just got out of learning about Mitosis but ...

This song was very deep and emotional. I liked it very much and I love the way that you wrote it.

Oh my goodness! I think I just peed my pants! That was hilarious!